This week our blog topic is a list of 5 words you must include somewhere in your piece. They can be anywhere in your piece and you can use them more than once!
Make sure you create your best piece. focus on your ideas and details, description, and order (content and ideas, organization, word choice, voice, sentence fluency, and conventions)
These are the five words: diamond book upset lost sprinting
100WC September,10 Bray
In this book called the Diamond Hunter there this hunter that searches for diamonds his name is Larry,and Larry to find struggling to find diamonds ad he is starting to get upset and he searched all day and night but when it started to get dark he had gone so far into the diamond forest he was lost.He got scared but decided to settle down and go to sleep.in the morning he said “i’m going to try and find my way out”,and he saw light and started sprinting towards it but it wasn’t the way out.
You left me in suspense!
I like how you left the readers question what would happen next.
One time I read a book about miners and i was upset because a person got lost sprinting,trying to listen to a person say”I found a diamond!” I was upset because he was running the other way out of the cave and into the forest for some reason. He lives in the woods making huts and spears and stuff to survive. Then finally years later a person finds him in his mud cave eating like a barbarian. He went back to the village and becomes a rock seller because he found all those rocks in the woods.
Well that was interesting, eating like a barbarian. At least he made it as a rock seller.
Max i really like how you put how you put detail in how this guy was eat he was eating like barbarian
100wc September 8 Brooke
I love rocks and diamonds a lot. I collect them too. I read books about rocks too. Also I have been to a couple of mining places where they have cool rocks and diamonds. Sometimes I get upset because I don’t get to go look for rocks because my parents work a lot. One time in 2 grade i brag one of my rocks to school and my teacher took it away and then she lost it. Now I know to not bring my rocks too school. Sometimes my mom and I go sprinting together, I find rocks on my way to the park.
Maybe your teacher just wanted those rocks 🙂 Do you have any really cool samples?
100wc September 8 Olivia
Some people go mining for gold or diamonds. People go all over the world to find diamonds because they can be very valuable and they cost a lot of money. People can get rich if they find a piece of diamond.
People that are miners sometimes write books or take photos to show what they found.
People have lost diamonds that they found so they get very upset.
Sometimes when they are digging a cave they come across another cave that has been dug and they start sprinting with excitement.
Diamonds are very pretty and they have been around for a long time
True, diamond hunters can make a lot of money if they find a special one. There is a park in the USA where people can often find diamonds. Try to find where it is.
100wc Thursday, September 10, 2020 Matti
In the world there thing that are a lot of money for an example diamonds are one.Diamonds are something that can be found almost anywhere even in a book.Some people can find diamonds from large to small you will probably find a small one first.You may be upset if you can not find one because diamonds can be mistaken for other things.Or you may have lost one so that would be another reason.When you realize you have found one you may end up spiriting to get it.Over all we have learned about diamonds.
I would be excited even if I found a small one!
wow that is cool Matti I never know that Diamonds can be found in a book.
100 word challenge 9/11/20 Cera
I love finding DIAMONDS in mine-craft. they are so shiny and blue. You can find them deep underground in caves. Sometimes I get LOST in the cave.I look for a way out,like dying,one way is to die in lava,another way is to get killed by a mob.I get UPSET when a mob unexpectedly kills me.sometimes I find some BOOKS.I’m SPRINTING when I need to run fast. mine-craft is so much fun and it is appropriate for kids.I personally think mine-craft is more appropriate then fortnite and roblox. It is fun and less gross killing.
Nice job taking these words and connecting to Minecraft!
HEY!!! some of us like roblox!!! and there’s no gross killing!!! and Roblox is to as appropiate as minecraft!!! AAAAARRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
100 wc Ella 9/10/2020
Once upon a time there was a 18 year old girl that was going to a barber to get a short bob hairstyle. And this girl’s name was Sam. And one day she walked into a very fancy barber shop. The first thing that caught her eye was a big diamond sitting in the corner of the shop.When she was getting her haircut she felt something sharp on her head. “OUCH!!!!!” Sam screamed.She looked in the mirror and she was bald!!!!! She immediately ran to the diamond upset, grabbed it and went. She sprinted all across town until she was lost!!!!!!!!!
Well, since they cut off her hair, I guess that was a fair trade.
wow that sounds painful Ella I am glad I not that girl.
Thien September 11, 2020 At 10:54 AM
The 100 word challenge
My first day in a cave I found a diamond far in the cave. The diamond was so shiny and cool. And the next day I walked to the library to read some books about the president of the world. And the 3rd day I was upset about my friend. He was doing bad things and I thought he was a good friend but he was not. The 4th day happened and I went to the forest to find some animals but all of a sudden I knew that I was lost so I started sprinting to find my car and it took me 1 hours to find my car again so I drove home and went to sleep.
Well you had quite a busy week 🙂
100 word challenge
One day a girl named Madi was born. This girl wasn’t normal why you ask, well whenever she is sprinting she would never feel tired you’re probably saying this isn’t bad she is probably just in shape well she is but everyone will feel tired eventually but she never does. Because of this she needs to be really carfall if she sprints for too long then she can pass out because she just doesn’t feel tired. Right now she isn’t sprinting because she is reading a book about diamonds. Sometimes she can also get lost if she sprints too far and that makes her upset.
That girl named Madi seems pretty talented, a sprinter and a reader!
Once there was a diamond book. And It was very upset no one knew why. One day he traveled to the lost wood. So when he came across the lion in the lost woods, the lion scared the diamond book. Then he started sprinting out of the forest. But the lion stopped him. He said he would be nice to diamond book if diamond book was nice back. Then the lion took the book out of the forest.They saw the kingdom. He was happy.