100 Word Challenge Week of November 16- Week 11

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100 Word Challenge November 16, 2020

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Remember, type your prompt as a google doc first. Do not paste it in as a comment until you are sure it is complete, headed correctly, proofread for spelling, capital letters, grammar, and punctuation, and is between 95-105 words! Then post your comment!

This week we have 5 words that all have to be in your writing but they can be in any order and can be anywhere in your piece. They are:

…Rolling…Crafty…Leaves…Castle…White…

24 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge Week of November 16- Week 11

  1. Once there was a boy and his name was Vob. so one day bob was walking on the street he saw a pile of leaves. so he thought about how much leaves would my mom let me bring home. The reason he thought that was because he was very crafty. but first, he went in the leaves to roll in them. On his way home he saw a castle. Then he wanted to go to the castle. But he was like what if someone lives there. so he went anyway. But there was a wizard. Von asked the wizard to make it snow the wizard did it. Finally, he saw the white snow.

  2. 100 Word Challenge Week of November 16- Matti
    In the spring we have cold and wet days.How most people spend spring is getting ready for summer and getting out of the cold winter.Summer is one of the most popular season because of the hot weather.Now for kids summer means no school and to build sand castles.In fall you may find kids going back to school.However you may see people rolling around in the leaves.Sometimes you may be crafting with the leaves.The last season is winter where the snow is wight and the air is cool.In winter you may see snowball flying in the air.

  3. By Max
    November 16
    100WC

    Once upon a time there was a white castle and within a woman who was very crafty. For some reason the man liked to rake the leaves so their favorite season was fall because the man could rake and the woman could make art from the leaves of all colors. Once she made one of those men that do awesome stuff like they roll and do stuff But then all her arts and crafts came to life and they served their purpose and once they were old they were happy because they died together. And the servants all found their purpose and now the castle has only the crafts that served their purpose.

    1. Hello Max,

      Fall can be a beautiful time of year as leaves turn in color and fall to the ground. Raking leaves can be a hard task for some but your characters found it a good time of year. He liked raking the leaves while she used her crafty skills top turn the leaves into works of art. Well done!

      Here in Australia we don’t have many native trees that lose their leaves in autumn (fall). They are evergreens. However, parks often have introduced trees that do.

      Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
      Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  4. 100WC Olivia 11/16/2020

    A long time ago, there was this queen named Marry. She lived In a huge white castle. Everyone loved her except this one guy named joe.
    He hated her because he was her servant. He was a nice man. He was very crafty. He loved making things.
    One day he had an idea. He would make a tube and put the queen in it. So he made a long tube. Then when the queen was not looking he shoved her in the tube and started rolling her down the hill. When she was at the bottom of the hill no one ever saw her again.

  5. Once upon a time, there was a gorgeous castle, with leaves and vines hanging off of it. There were two twin princesses named Autumn and Summer. These princesses were very crafty. One day they decided to start an art sale for the poor. They immediately began to paint and draw. When Summer was drawing, the pencil went rolling off the table. She picked it up and the led was broken, so she went to sharpen it. They started the sale and it was going pretty good. The sale went for about two weeks. They wanted to do sales more often because they loved it so much.

    1. Hello Avita,
      That was a smart way to include all the prompts into the story line, what with the princesses both wanting to do what they love to do.
      Keep on writing, Avita.

  6. Jake November 16

    Hey guys! My name is Zakery but you can call me Zak. I really love art. It’s just amazing because you can make anything you want that’s in your brain. Today in art we got to make a castle out of clay. Mine was white. I had to be careful bringing it home because all of the leaves outside could ruin it because it’s not dry yet. I wish I made Olivers because then it wouldn’t matter if it hit the leaves because it was already ugly but then I tripped and my castle went rolling to the ground! So my crafty work was ruined.

  7. One morning in the big white castle there was a big dinner.There was a lot of yummy food there was shrimp,steak,all the green vegetables so the king,queen,and the prince ate the food.The chefs were very crafty with the meal, but one day the chefs got a job offer from a multi billionaire company so they decided to leave.When they start leaving they all trip and start rolling down the big hill.When the chef get to the new job they regretted it the billionaire is so mean he thought he ruled everyone so they quit,so they were unemployed.

    1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Bray. It is not easy to weave five random words into a coherent text. You generated interesting ideas about the chefs. I wonder if you intended the story to have a moral? Some of your sentences are what I call ‘run on sentences’ – where there should really be a full stop to make two sentences. A good strategy is to read your writing aloud so you can hear where full stops should be. (Or ask a friend to help you edit.) 😊

  8. I live in a castle with white bricks I love to craft my mom says I’m very crafty I paint stones and then I had them so people can find them but today I’m doing something different me and my brother are going to roll down the hill it was fun me and him were rolling as fast as we can into the leaves then we tried to find in the rocks we did something different again we hit them in the town so more people could find them we had behind the buildings and then we seen little children picking them.

    1. This is a lovely story. It would even been a better if you use punctuation. It sounded like a great day.

    2. Hi Alaya! This sounds like an exciting day to have. I think I would have found it easier to read your story if there was more punctuation. The first bit could be divided into a few sentences, like so:

      “I live in a castle with white bricks. I love to craft. My mom says I’m very crafty.”

      I like how you used the words in the prompt to tell a story about someone’s day. Reading this cheered me up.

      Keep it up and keep writing!

  9. 100 WC 11/16/2020 Elli

    Sasha wanted to make a cake today because she felt crafty. She got all the ingredients ready and started making a white vanilla cake. When she put the batter in the oven she got to work Sasha started thinking about what she should make out of the cake then finally she got a good idea Sasha wanted to make a castle out of cake so she started making fluffy frosting for the cake when she got finished with the frosting she started rolling the fondant, and when she got done the bell for the cake ringed. Next Sasha took the cake out of the oven she could feel the warm breeze or steam on her face. When she put the cake on the counter she put the frosting in the piping bag and started piping frosting onto the cake Sasha also made leaves out of fondant because it was fall. At the end of the day Sasha got to enjoy her delicious castle cake with fake leaves on it.

    1. Elli, You really seem to know your way around a kitchen. I love that you you use transitional signal words to show that time is moving, such as finally, next, at the end of the day. Caution yourself regarding their punctuation, they normally have a comma following them. (Ex: Next, the teacher ate the cake. Finally, she took a nap.)

      Keep writing! McBreezy Los Angeles, Ca #team100

  10. By Max
    November 16
    100WC

    Once upon a time there was a white castle and within a woman who was very crafty. For some reason the man liked to rake the leaves so their favorite season was fall because the man could rake and the woman could make art from the leaves of all colors. Once she made one of those men that do awesome stuff like they roll and do stuff But then all her arts and crafts came to life and they served their purpose and once they were old they were happy because they died together. And the servants all found their purpose and now the castle has only the crafts that served their purpose.

  11. * 100WC
    *November 16, 2020
    *Nathan

    The knights were hunting a crafty dragon, they searched everywhere but they could not find the dragon. They decided to try again in the morning, but they still could not find it. They went back to their white castle to come up with a strategy. The knights tried again and they realized that the dragon was on vacation. They waited for the dragon to return and when it came back and landed it blew all the leaves off the trees. There were rolling leaves everywhere. The knights started fighting the dragon and won the battle.

    1. Hello Nathan, I think dragons are so interesting. What a pity the dragon didn’t stay on holidays. He wasn’t quite “crafty enough”. I really like the image you created with the dragon blowing all the leaves away. Well done.

    2. Hi Nathan,
      I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
      I thought the notion of the dragon going on vacation was great …I wonder what was the dragon doing to upset the knights? …Feeling just a little bit sorry for the dragon!
      Good work this week.
      Keep writing.

      Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
      Cork.
      Ireland

      https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/

  12. 100 Word Challenge Week of November 19- Matti
    In the spring we have cold and wet days.How most people spend spring is getting ready for summer and getting out of the cold winter.Summer is one of the most popular season because of the hot weather.Now for kids summer means no school and to build sand castles.In fall you may find kids going back to school.However you may see people rolling around in the leaves.Sometimes you may be crafting with the leaves.The last season is winter where the snow is wight and the air is cool.In winter you may see snowball flying in the air.

  13. 100wc Ella 11-19-2020

    Hello, my name is Princess Asparagus. But my friends just call me Princess Gus. Of course I am a princess and I live in a shining white castle. I love to do crafty things. In fact,right now I am working on a rolling,leaf scrapbook. With a bunch of different leafs and their types. My mother always says that,”No princess crafts” and “Crafting is not a very princess thing to do.” I just wish my mom under stood me better. On the other hand though,my dad just sleeps all the time. So,I don’t get lectures from him. Like,at all! So yah,that is my life!

    1. Ella, Sounds like your princess is making her own path! Princess Gus is a unique name, never spare a gus! Lol. Keep writing!
      McBreezy #team100

  14. Hi Ella
    I love how you’ve used the prompt words to create the character ‘Princess Asparagus’. You’ve made her into a fun princess too. I really liked how you had her doing crafty things even though her mother didn’t think it was a very princess thing to do. I laughed when I read what she said. Well done. A very creative use of the prompt words.
    Máire O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
    Galway, Ireland

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