100 Word Challenge September 28 Week 4

100 Word Challenge September 28, 2020

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100WC September 28 Eddie

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This week we have 5 words that all have to be in your writing but they can be in any order and can be anywhere in your piece. They are:

VIOLIN   BRUISED   WALKED

GREEN   PRICKLY

42 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge September 28 Week 4

  1. 100wc 9-29-2020 Bray

    This morning I was so excited today my baby brother is supposed to be born. I could almost hear the happy violin in my head. I walked around my house pacing for the time i would go to the hospital.The grass was shining green it was beautiful.Finally it was time,I got to the hospital I found my mom’s room walking made my back hairs stand up.I came in the hospital room saw my baby brother oh how cute he was.But i got bad news he was born with a heart murmur bruised heart my chest became prickly.

  2. Olivia 100wc 9/28/2020

    One day I was at music class. Our music teacher miss Bean walked into the class and said we are going to play the violin today. Everyone was so happy to play. We all started playing it and everything was good.
    Then miss Bean told everyone to get up and stretch so we did. Then I tripped over these big boxes filled with big green cactuses. My heart stopped beating for a second. Then I was in the box my body hurt so bad. Then I got up out of the box. And the cactuses were so prickly I was bruised all over my body.

    1. Hi Olivia
      Ouch!!! You’ve really used the prompt words very creatively to weave a very interesting story. I love how you start out with the lovely idea of a music class and how everyone was enjoying playing the violin. And then you introduced the idea of stretching which led to the unfortunate event of you falling into the box full with cactuses. Did you know that there are two words for the plural of cactus? Cactuses and Cacti (which apparently comes from Latin). Well done. I really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge.
      Máire O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
      Galway, Ireland.

  3. Jake 100wc Sept. 28

    One day in the desert there was a cactus named Green. This cactus was very lonely because he was alone all the time. This might sound odd but Green plays the violin and whenever he is sad he plays it but one day when he was playing it a bully heard it and said to himself ‘’ that sound so dumb’’ so the bully followed the sound and when he saw Green he laughed and said ‘’ look how prickly that guy is. When Green looked up and saw someone he was so happy but the bully walked away and Green was heartbroken.

    1. Jake,you did i GREAT job with your story! but…. something i would work on is adding more (?!.,) but other then that your story is really good, it low key made me feel bad for Green.

  4. 100 wc Ella 9-28-2020

    One Friday I decided to learn how to play a violin. So I told my mom and she said I would have to rent one. After dinner we drove over to the music shop and my mom filled out the form for the violin and then we got back in the car. My mom told me to wait to look at my violin until we got home. But I just couldn’t resist! It opened the case and the bow was all prickly and then I started to turn green and bruised I couldn’t walk! OH-NO! The bow must have been poisonous!

  5. 100wc September 28 Cera

    There once was a girl and her name was Alice.Her favorite color is green.She was in a band and she plays the violin.She was running late,she wanted to run but her teacher told her not to run.So she walked to the band.She started to speed walk,then she fell on the ground and got bruised badly.She was not about to let a bruised knee get the better of her,so she try to hold back the pain.From the start she know her teacher loves prickly things.Like cactus

    1. I love the creative ideas and thinking you put into this and all that like she was in band and like how her teacher liked cactus it was awsome

  6. By Thien
    100WC September 28, 2020

    Long ago there were two kids that were best friends there name was Alex, Alan. They were best friends in school and they had music class, and they told each other what their favorite instrument was and Alex favorite was a violin, and Alan favorite was a trumpet, so every single day they walked together until a day they found a green prickly cactus in the middle of the road, and Alex thought it would be bad to leave it there so he came and grabbed it and ouch, Alex hand has a bruised it was not normal so Alex got took to the hospital.

    1. I like the idea behind your story and could imagine that a bruise caused by a cactus spike would make it very difficult to play a violin. Sometimes it helps to read a story out loud to help hear when things sound a bit off like “their names were Alex and Alan.” I think this is a great start though and hope Alex can play again after he leaves the hospital.

  7. 100 word challenge Monday, September 28, 2020
    Matti
    Once there was a man his name was Jason ,he was an old man in his 50.Jason loved his life with his violin but one day he got sick he was told he had bruised.That did not stop him he would have walked and played his song.He had told a story of the man who walked the man was him he said he would walk the longest distinct on the dirt road with prickly cactus in his feet.The man was different from the rest ,most people would give up but not him he kept going was his violin.

  8. Brooke 100wc September 29

    One morning I went for a walk. I walked till I saw a music store. I went inside because I was looking for an instrument to play for school. I looked around for a bit and I saw a violin and it had a green tint of color. I really liked it so I got my wallet and I had the money for it so I bought it. When they gave me the case and the violin after I bought it I walked back home and I tripped on a cactus and got a big bruise on my knee and a prickly splinter on my finger.

  9. 100 WC September 28 Elli

    Once upon a time there was a girl named Shasha who loved music. Her family was very poor so she had to walk to her violin class while she walked along the green shiny grass all of a sudden something prickly poke her it was a pine cone Shasha was wearing sandals and it went through her feet she had to sit down for 20 minutes before someone saw her the next day her right foot was bloody and bruised her parents had to give all the money they had to pay the doctors but she became a famous person for playing her violins and her family never had a struggle with money ever again.

  10. 100WC Avita October 2
    My name is Destiny. I play violin. When I was practicing I found out I was bruised on my ankle. “No wonder it hurt when I walked!” Destiny said. It was purple-ish green also looking like a weird looking rock. “It kind of looks like a prickly cactus.😖” Destiny tried not to laugh but couldn’t bear it. “😧 Omg! I need to go to violin class before I’m late!” Destiny whisper-yelled. No wonder she has A+ I’m every class. Other people in Destiny’s violin class think she’s a plain old nerd,but she doesn’t care. Destiny’s a good student and never got in trouble,or even near it!

    1. Avita good job with the story,i like how you put those little emojis! Your story is really creative and you should make a free write about destiny!

    2. Nice descriptions, Avita! Destiny must be very determined, going to violin class with her ankle bruised like that.

  11. 100WC
    October 1
    Nathan

    There was once a dog named Bippity who got hurt by running into a prickly bush. Bippity lived with a boy who went outside and cut the big green bush down and while he was cutting the big green bush down he got bruised by the big green bush. The boy played the violin and he played it for Bippity to make her feel better. The boy took Bippity to the park where they walked on the sidewalk and after they played at the dog park they walked back home to play together. They went to bed and fell asleep together.

    1. Your story was very enjoyable. But next time remember to put in the words that Mr. Saliman assigned. Like,violin,prickly,green,bruised,and walked.😁

  12. Ayden 100WC October 1
    Once there was a boy who liked playing the violin. but when he was walking to school he saw something in. in the distance it was something green and prickly so. He went to see it and it was a cactus when he got really close he touched it by. Accident and he got really bruised up by the cactus and. then he went to school so he can wash the bruise so he can make his arm better so when he was done helping his arm fill better he went to band class and he was. practicing his violin and after school he went home and did his homework. and then he went to bed the end.

  13. 100 wc september 2020

    One day this kid named josh was at reese his bully wald up and sed give me your lunch money josh got up and walked away and his bully pushed him he fell on a green prickly bush broke his violin on bruised his rib. He went home and told his mom his mom told the principal and his bully got expelled one month later. His bully was back and he had been practicing boxing and his bully had been working out so the next day his bully sed gave me lunch money he said no he got up and punched the bully and his bully went to a different school.

  14. Austin 28th 100wc

    Bob and Bill lost their green violins, they looked everywhere and they could not find them. So they went out and looked for it. They were walking down the sidewalk when they saw this one random bush. It was quite prickly but there was no green violin in the bush. So they kept looking but they did not find it. Bill had to go eat dinner and so did Bob. They were like we have to find it. Tomorrow so tomorrow they shoot out the bed and out of the house and meet up to start. They looked in the bush and found it they brushed it off and it was theirs.

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