100 Word Challenge!!
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This week, we have a picture! You can really be creative with this one! Don’t describe the picture, write a story!
100WC Jake Oct 6
One day a long time ago there was a kingdom. This kingdom was living there lives normally when the king rushed outside and called an emergency meeting he said that there was a war coming. All of the civilians were in panic and never left their homes. The king couldn’t let the kingdom be frightened anymore so he sent his best knight to help fight the war and the knight died in a second. The king had to figure this out. He decided to shoot a bomb at the war so some knights went to the top of the tower and shot it. They WON.
100wc October-6-2020 Bray
Today me and my family are going on vacation to an abandoned Caribbean island and as we were touring to Museum we saw statues that look like pirates shooting a cannon out of a bunker.
Some of the statues were Knelling like they were worshiping someone and it looked like there was a fireplace behind the men. The men looked like maybe a war was going on and they were protecting their land from impostors trying to take their land.That was a cool sight to see.I hope while on this trip i will see more cool statues like that.
100 Word Challenge-October 5 Matti
We heard the bell ring the king yelled to set the bombs.We raced up the cold dark black stairs only to find that 2 lay dead on the floor.The 4 of us raced to where the kept the bombs.There was brown cloth surrounding it.I ran to try to get something to light it with.One man was aiming for the right spot.I ran as fast as i could.When I reached the men I split but as I was falling I hit it and a big black ball came out and then I knew we won.
That was a really exciting story. I’m not quite sure how you won, but congratulations.
100 WC
10/6/2020
Elli
Once upon a time there lived three brothers their names were Billy, Bobby and Joe. They all live with their dad on an island in the middle of nowhere their dad said some evil people trap them. One day the youngest brother Joe spotted something at night it looked like colorful fire in the air of course he had to tell his dad and brothers so the next day they made a plan they only had one canon and parachute next they voted who would go in the canon Joe’s big brothers always win so he went in the canon and you would never guess what Joe found on the other side.
Hi Elli!
What a great story! I really enjoyed how you presented the reader with the background information such as who the boys are, where they are and why they were there. It taught me about the characters so I was able to visualise your story better.
Your story was very intriguing! It kept me on the edge of my seat. I love how you wrote a mysterious ending and it makes me want to know more about what Joe found and what his brothers and dad think.
Great job!
Once upon a time, in the 1800 four brothers where working in an old antique museum. There names where Chain, Alex, Rubim, and Timofey. The four cared very much about each other. “They would never leave each other’s sight” There parents said. “But once they got older they had to leave.” “Wait!” Said Rubim “We can get the same job and work together!” The four brothers agreed and started brainstorming good jobs that they all wanted ideas. One of the ideas were “Work at an antique museum” and so they did. There job meant a lot to them, so they worked hard. Like it always was they were brothers and they where thankful.
100 wc Ella 10-5-2020
Hi my name is Albert Cunningham. I am in fourth grade and I am learning about the American Revolution. And I am falling way behind in class. So I went home and asked my dad if he could take me to the museum to learn more about the American Revolution. He agreed,so we hopped in the car and started to drive. We pulled up at the museum. I am so excited! We walked in and right there in front of me were 3 wax figures of men shooting a cannonball! I could not breathe I was so scared!
Once there were two men. They were just the cannon fire people; their job was to make sure that no one infiltrated their kingdom. One day there was an attack they did not have enough balls to take down the opponent so the knights fought and fought and finally they had won the battle so the the people were like yay and woo and soon they realized that the other peoples kingdom was giant so they went through many battles and soon they had destroyed the others but then one day a dragon came it was bad luckily they shot it out of the air and then ate it.
A really creative story, Max. I like how simply it begins and how quickly the action spirals into something bigger.
I have to admit, though, that last sentence left me out of breath! I would have loved it more if you’d separated it into a few shorter sentences. I also wonder where the dragon came from. Was it always there? Or was it working with the enemy kingdom?
Still, I really like how much action there is in this story. Well done!
Thien 100WC
October 7, 20202
One day there were pirates, sailing the ocean those pirates were very mean they attack people ships, one day ship members were getting sick so the captain took care of it, the captain make sure that all of the members were warm, the ship members said we will get better soon, so one day they were in a battle with other ships and they lost, all of them were hurt so the captain sail to their island, they got supplies and took care of the crew members the captain felt sorry, so he said he would never attack other people again, so he lived normal again.
Hey Thien!
This was a really inspiring story. You taught the reader a great lesson about caring for others and how important it is.
You only used one fullstop at the end of the story which was great, but I thought that throughout the story, you could have used more instead of a comma.
Otherwise, this was a really great story which I enjoyed a lot. It made me feel happy and warm inside to read it.
Good job!
100 wc october 6 2020
One day in 98BC there were a crew of pirates and they robbed a town and got 700,000 coins each costs 100 dollars which means they got 70,000,000 dollars.Now they are the richest pirates in the Caribbean sea and some other group of pirates saw on the paper in the town so. They went and tried to steal the70,000,000 dollars so they shot a cannon ball and missed the captain, heard the shot and told the crew to shoot back so they did and hit the bottom of the boat and another canan ball hit and sank the other ship.
100WC October 5 Cera
Once upon a time there lived a pirate and his name was Blackbeard he loved adventuring out on his very small boat that he had,but one night when he was sleeping on his boat a huge ship came and captured him,so when he woke up he was puzzled because he did not know where he was.A few minutes later a pirate came down and said his name was blue tooth and that he was their prisoner.” What “ Blackbeard said.He asked why did they want him as their prisoner and how did they find him.Blue tooth just shrugs.
Brilliant story, I really liked the character name Bluetooth.I wish there was more to read
Olivia 100wc 10/7/2020
On time me and my mom were in the store and all of a sudden I heard this big loud bang. It was so loud you could probably hear it from 3 miles away.
No one knew what it was, everyone was so scared. But then we heard it again. So this lady named Karen went to go see what it was.
When she found out what it was she was very surprised. It was a guy trying to make a movie with a real canan. Everyone hated the idea of the movie. They thought it was way too dangerous. So the guy stopped making it.
Nathan 100 word ch 10-8
In a castle far away the dragon was sleeping in its cave. Then with the loud bang of the conon the dragon woke up and was angry. He was ready to breath fire on everything. The dragon had slept ten to twenty years. And the dragon went back to sleep.And when the dragon got up the next morning it went out to hunt. Then the dragon had babies.And the dragon cared for its babies and fed them.And the baby dragons grew into strong dragons.Then the baby dragons went to try and find mates.And they finally found mates.And each one had babies of there one.And they touted their babies what they know.
100 WC Oct 6 willow
A long time ago there was a crowd of Pirates on the open sea with a canon. They had lots of enemies and they wore t-shirts with white shirts underneath them. They were crossing the Atlantic ocean when suddenly the ship started to shake and they were being targeted by an enemy, 4 men went down to the canon room and got the canon ready to fire! They shot and they mist ,they got it ready and they got it. On the back of the other ship was a snake symbol . They tried to tell the captain…
In world war two there were 4 men. Who bang a cannon and their captain. Allowed them to use it when the war. Started they shot the first ball. And it hit the captains bunker and it fell apart and. when the soldiers made it to the island they shot another one and … hit!. Again and the other soldiers saluted them. for helping them and when they made it to their bunker. They were ready again but this was a tough against the. Chinese they had fake trees they had snipers in the fake trees. And the Americans won the war the end.
100 -wc Alaya October 9
“Captain there are knights outside there are attacking us” Servant said “ the captain said fire the cannon balls and wake up in the Knights,ok sir.They blow the trumpet and yelled we’re being attacked and they woke up and loaded the canon balls then the captain woke his family up the they want to the safe room a 30 m later they came out and the war was over the place was not nice rite now the door was broken they did not break all the stuff but the war was over and no won got h:-(
There was this time in history when people called pirates sailed the seven seas. One day the pirates were sailing on the pacific ocean, then they saw an Island not just any island they were looking for that island!! The island they were looking for was full of gold diamonds, everything you can imagine!! They were finally here; they had been trying to find this island for 10 years! Then when one of the pirates set their foot on the island a dragon attacked them from the sky they ran to the ship.Then they went to the room that had a cannon. Then they shot a bullet.
Austin oct 5th 100wc
Jerry,Fill,Bob and Bill were brothers with Jerry being the oldest and Bob being the youngest they were on ship. And they saw this one empty canone; they asked the captain if they could load it. And the captain said yes so they went to go load the cannon and they saw the cannon balls. They started to load it, they loaded the cannon they came back to the deck and they were under attack and all of the cannons fired at the other ship they all ran out of cannonballs beside the one they loaded the shot and won the battle.