100 Word Challenge April 19
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This week we have a phrase. This can be anywhere in your prompt. It could be the beginning or end, beginning or end of a sentence, or somewhere in the middle.
…as it let out a pitiful howl…
(BTW, this week’s prompt was written by a fifth grader from California)
100 word challenge Aniyah April 22 2021
My family and I went camping this summer even though I did NOT want to come they made me anyway . The place we were hunting was about 1hr away so on the way we stopped at this gas station called Kum and Go . I got a bag of hot cheetos, a soda, and a bag of peanut m&ms . In the gas station there was a wolf stuffed animal but as it let out a pitiful howl my mom called my name . Later that night I heard the same howl everyone was sleeping so I got up to check it out and there it looked like the same one at the store but then it was coming near me !
Hi Aniyah,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I’m hoping that you were just having a nightmare…
Good work this week.
Keep writing.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/
4-22-2021 Ella 100 word count
So today I had a little accident. And I would like to tell you about it if you don´t mind. Today was a rainy but sunny day. And I decided to go outside and ride my bike. And I usually go in the gutters in the street with my bike. So of course,I did that. But this time it didn´t turn out so well. I hit the gutter sideways with my bike. My bike hit the ground but the wheels kept turning. The sidewalk scraped all of the skin off my hip! I let out a pitiful howl! ¨OWWWWWWWW!¨ I screamed!
Hi Ella,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
Ouch! It sounds sore… I nearly let out a pitiful howl myself as I was reading it!
Good work this week.
Keep writing.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/
100wc
4/22/2021
AydenC
As it let out a pitiful howl i started to run back to my house right as the beast caught up i found a baseball bat and i hit the beast and after he got. up he started to run at me again so i hit it in the head. and i knocked it out and then i started running to my house and i made. it back so i called the cops and they arrived an hour. later so told them what happen so they went. to go see what happen and they said there was nothing so now it just watches me.
Cera
100wc
Once there lived a wolf and her name was Nina and her family loved watching her catch her pray but poor Nina she just could not allow herself to kill her prey even though her parent every time told her to kill her prey in a instant her mom and dad would say”some day you will the the hard way that you have to kill your prey.”and she said”no I will not kill my prey.”then all of a sudden Nina let out a pitiful scream.”WHAT IS THAT”Nina screamed”What.”her parent said?
One day I was walking in the woods. I was getting dark, so I started walking back to my house. Then I saw something move in the trees. Then I saw it was a wolf. Now I was scared so I started running back to my house. Then it let out a pitiful howl. I looked at its leg and it was bleeding. So I slowly walked up to it and I put some of my water on its leg then it stopped howling. So I left it lying on the ground for its leg to heal, but it got up and ran away.
100WC 4/22/2021 Elli
It was the year 1983 when the last rare wolf died. As I woke up that day I felt normal. It was a warm sunny day in the fall and I had just woken up. I had school that day so I went to school. After I got back from school I grabbed a snack and sat down on the living room couch. I turned on the tv and I saw the rare wolf. The news reported that it was on the loose then all of a sudden as it let out a pitiful howl there was a huge shake in the ground. I couldn’t believe it when I looked out the window and saw someone shoot the wolf in the middle of the small town. That night the person that shot the rare wolf got sentenced to 30 years in prison.
100WC Jake April 22
I am Jake and my family is camping right now. I thought this camping trip was going to be fun and normal but I was just going back to the tent and I saw it. It was a friendly wolf it’s dark out so he must have gotten separated from his pack. The only reason I found was because It came to me as it let out a pitiful howl. I brought him back to the tent and told my parents what happened. This wolf was still small so it’s probably young so I guess I have a new pet wolf
Great story Jake! I liked how unexpected it was that the wolf was friendly! To improve I would just make sure you check your grammar.
Keep up the good work.
Daisy
Team 100 w/c
Edinburgh
Brooke
April 22 100wc
Once there was a girl named Emily. She loves night walks, she also sees animals that she never sees in the day. One night she was getting ready to go on a walk, she got her shoes on, her jacket on, and she was already to go. As she started walking she heard a loud pitiful howl. She knew it was a hurt wolf and she hears them often at night. She started to get close to the howl. She saw the hurt wolf laying on the gravel ground and as it let out a pitiful howl one last time.
So poetic! I really enjoyed your piece! Very well done!
Max D
100WC
Panting and choking through my breath I say, “I have to find a way out” I start to run again I find an accessible tree and start to climb. As I climb I see a soft spot on top. I tell myself I should go to sleep and keep searching tomorrow. At four in the morning one of the wolves lets out a howl as it lets out a pitiful howl I try to fall back asleep. I couldn’t so I just played games in my head. Soon when I saw the sun rise I saw an opening and left. Thank god I didn’t get killed.
100 WC
Once I was walking my dog in the woods when he got out of his leash and ran away.I didn’t go back to the woods until 2 years later.I started to walk on the trail.Then I saw something shiny and went to go look at it.I found a lot of metal I and realized I was lost.It was getting dark and I went over to a place with no trees.But then I heard something as it let out a pitiful howl and as I braced for the worst but then I saw my dog jump out.
Hi Matti,
Well done on your story this week. I’m glad that everything turned out well and your found your dog!
Keep up the great work.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin
Willow 100 WC Apr 22
One day I was walking through the woods with a gun to get to my grandmother’s house. She lived in the deep dark woods and there was no road. One step in the wrong direction would get me to the wolf woods. Suddenly I heard the leaves on the ground rustling and it was bad. I pulled out my gun and shot up in the air and it made a BOOM I heard as it let out a pitiful howl. It was right in front of me I aimed my gun at it and shot it was done. I was a hero.
One day, a wolf was walking through the woods and saw a rock, a big rock, a really big rock, a really really big rock, a really really really big rock, a really really really really big rock, a really really really really really big rock, (ok i’ll stop now) then a super duper magical spell was put on the rock, and it rolled over onto the scared wolf, it let out a pitiful howl, arrooooooo, arrooooooo, arrooooooo, arrooooooo, arrooooooo, arrooooooo, then the wolf asked the rock to stop, then the giant rock, rolled off of the wolf, the moral? I don’t know.
One day I was walking in the forest as i jump a wolf come and as it let out a pitiful howl it came to me. It was scared and had a broken bone. I went to the store and got stuff to fix the bone and then I put the stuff on the wolf and the wolf looked better and I named it of cross and I loved it with all my heart .
Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Alaya. You generated interesting ideas for your writing. I liked your careful choice of vocabulary eg pitiful; and your phrase ‘ loved it with all my heart’. To raise your writing to the next level, try to use ‘and’ less. You could try using a different word, or start a new sentence. 🙏😊
100WC by Thien
Fri, Apr 23
Hi my name is Jack and today I will be telling you of my story about going camping, it was a special day my mom and dad took me camping, we packed flash lights, food and more. As we went inside the forest I saw an owl I looked at it and saw its wings hurt I slowly bandage the owl wings as it let out a pitiful howl then I took it to where my mom and dad was setting the camp up, when we were done camping we went home and took the owl with us. The next day I saw the owl feel better so I let it go. So that’s how my camping went.
Austin apr22 100wc
One day there was a dog and he has not been fed in the past week. And one day he got mad at his owner and he chased after him and then he put the man’s head inside the dog’s bowl. And the dog started to talk and he was talking in a low voice and said you better feed me. As the man let out a pitiful howl and the man ran out of the house and got in his car and got the dog some food and then the dog let out a pitiful howl and said I need water.
One day there was a wolf walking near camp and I freaked out and mama said there’s nothing there but i knew i saw a wolf as it let out a pitiful howl. the next morning me and my daddy went out to the woods to get wood and the wolf was back then dissapeared again i thought i was going crazy but then the wolf jumped right on my daddy i got scared as the wolf left into nowhere so i decided to read on secret and the wolf is a werewolf and is part of an emrald secret with mama